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Climbing 4 Jingle’s Thursday Rally for poets

perfect poet award week 22
perfect poet award week 22

This is my post for jingle’s Thursday rally for poet. Which our sweet, unique jingle holds at her blog
she also runs another marvellous blog :

Knowing her is a great joy and bliss.

my poem for Thursday Rally for Poets and Perfect Poet Award for Week 22:


there were moments when I felt
I just cant take a step further
The hill was too steep
The rock too slippery
Hardly any thing to hold on.

I scrambled on all my four
Dragged myself to the top
And stood there mesmerized
Spellbound and hypnotized
As the horizon unraveled.

Majestic mountains standing
Haughtily around me
A silence so deep
I felt I can touch it
No bird no beast was calling.

White clouds in deep blue sky
Were painting their own paintings
I stood there simply gawking
At that scene of lifetime.

my nominee for this priceless award :

She is marvellous. Simply fantastic.

There is another thing i will like you all to know, since 10th last week my internet connection is driving me crazy. Thats the only reason behind my not filling up your blogs with comments. Please give me some time I will be back bugging you soon. I love to read your works.


A bookworm transformed into an addicted writer. I love to write and illustrate them myself. By love I mean love, no half-hearted relationship, a full-fledged, passionate love, I can’t pass two days in a stretch without writing/painting (cyber), just feel empty like lovers do when their lovers are away on a tour! Even though I am thoroughly enjoying self-publishing with amazon, but if you like my work and want to publish my works in your magazine, books or better if you want to publish a book of my works please make me very happy by contacting me. Or if you want to sell my works on commission basis only!! contact me, I will be quite relieved. Honestly writing and selling your own work is a very BORING combination. So you are more than welcome! Mail me, or go to- my blog (I have 16 blogs in wordpress, all active, some on daily basis, every one on weekly basis screaming and vowing my LOVE for writing and painting- this one is first-born, so special) (You will get the link to my remaining blogs there) or you can check out my ezines- monthly- And if you want fb you can go to my page, linkedin- my email id and I am in goodreads and completelynovel too I guess I said enough about myself, right? You will forget if I stuff too much here, so if you are curious to know this humble creature just join me in my blogs :)

31 thoughts on “Climbing 4 Jingle’s Thursday Rally for poets

  1. excellent delivery of the feelings of struggles or frustrations…you will still try and do…

    thank you for the award acceptance and nomination.
    I will place your link in.

  2. Trish, this poem is awesome. It can take its readers too many different levels of meaning. My favorite meaning of your poem is, you are using the struggles of mountain climbing to demonstrate the struggles of life, but no matter how hard your trials are, if you keep going you will find peace once you reach the top. There is so much beauty in this poem for one’s eyes to behold. I love all the verses, but below is my favorite ones.

    White clouds in deep blue sky
    Were painting their own paintings
    I stood there simply gawking
    At that scene of lifetime

  3. Trish, I forgot to add this message that I wrote for everyone who is concern about Larry, my husband.

    Update on Larry:
    Larry went into the hospital last month to get well, and came out a very ill man. His stool test came back showing he has a bacteria call C Diff. This bacteria was caused by Doctor Edwards giving him to much antibiotics by IV the first time he was admitted into the hospital. I don’t blame doctor Edward he was just trying to get rid of the infection that got into Larry’s blood. I just thank God for answering our prayers, and showing the colon doctor what is wrong with Larry. Now that they know what is wrong they can start treating him correctly with the right medicines for this bacteria. Larry is still a very sick man, and came close to death the last couple of weeks, but I am praying this new medicine will soon help.

    Not only does Larry still need prayers, I need everyone to help me pray nobody in my family gets this, or anyone else who has been around him, because it is very contagious. Howver, I do clean the bathroom every time he uses it. I told my friend Liz, every time he runs to the bathroom, I run behind him to clean it up with bleach

    1. dearest, sweetest viola,
      I am happy that the doctor diagnosed correctly. hope it will be cured very soon. in the meantime be careful about your health too. will you?

      All my love and prayers are with you and larry. He will get well soon, and i sincerely pray that you stay in best cheers to relish his recovery.

      love you so very much.

  4. White clouds in deep blue sky
    Were painting their own paintings
    love this, the long hard climg is definitely worth it.

  5. Please return favors to poets who were here,
    Thank you in advance…
    everyone needs encouragement…
    Happy Friday!

    I have sent this to every poet in my list.

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