Dawn has broken
Black sky has turned blue
Deepest shade of pure blue
Stars are twinkling softly.
Waiting for the sun to come
So they could rest for a while
Moon is still not sure
If she will return home.
Or wait and meet sun
To wish him goodbye
So she lingers in the sky
As birds sing, stars sparkle.
A beautiful silver maiden
Waiting for the Apollo
Soon he will show up
Riding his seven horse chariot.
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Realm of Empress Musie 
“Moon is still not sure
If she will return home.
Or wait and meet sun
To wish him goodbye”
I really like this part because for the last several early mornings have watch the moon still visible in the predawn sky. It is a beautifully poetic way of expressing this delightful vision.
Peace,
Suzanne
it really looks so beautiful, doesnot it?
beautiful moon wishes and uplifting spirits…
I like the gentleness of moon,
thanks for the fabulous writing!
😉
i too love the serene peacefulness of moon, and power and promise of light of sun.,
what a lovely poem dear,very good imagery, ur the best 🙂
i am no where near the best. 🙂
this is SO BEAUTIFUL…so poetic and romantic..
well done,Trisha…
you are truly a prolific writer…
blessed be…
take care of you..
hugs
shakira
dear, sweet shakira,
thanks for the sweet pampering.
lots of love.
Simply beautiful Trish, and you painted a perfect picture all through your poem. I love the way you open your poem with the first 4 lines. It is a strong poem with a good foundation.
Dawn has broken
Black sky has turned blue
Deepest shade of pure blue
Stars are twinkling softly.
dearest viola,
i have the eyes of a dreamer and you have the heart and soul of an angel.
lots of love.
The staggering visits of the moon and sun make life glorious. Beautiful.
i love the sky and all the things that are part of it so much 🙂
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a beautiful heavenly world described in sweet words ; well done Basu.
thanks a lot rahim.
haha so true..
you are sounding a little mischievous, why? 🙂
Great way of having a relationship between day and night. yep yep, good to see your still writing well and sorry i haven’t been around much but that shall change.
i too have to say the same thing to you. actually sometimes movies kidnap me and every thing goes haywire here.
Golden Lotus of God’s Love as always you keep putting them out there and they just keep getting better and better..very beautiful poem…enjoy as well(+) 🙂
soulbro*xo
thanks a lot dearest soulbro.
I love the moon. I used to love to read Moon Bear to my kids. They loved him and Moon Bear loves the moon. thanks that was great
alan
i too love the moon. i have not read moon bear. its good to have a dad who will read stories for you. my parents never told us a story they handed us dozens of books 🙂
thanks alan.
beautiful reflection…nice work!
thanks a lot.
lovely thoughts on how night changes to day and back again. Heartspell
thanks a lot. i love that moment in time.
Hey, i like this one.
A bit lighter than i usually see.
Not that your other one’s aren’t great, cos they are. lol
ha ha. thanks a lot richard. you are wonderful. 🙂
chariot of seven horses……ah Apollo, very nice…bkm
i have loved the sun god since i first read about him 🙂
The moon goes to the other side of the world, while the sun comes to another part. And then, as times moves on, they switch places. 🙂
hmm. very correctly said.
lots of love.
Beautiful way to express your imagination…
Very well done….
thanks a lot gaurav.
A beautiful silver maiden
Waiting for the Apollo
I love this bit
thanks a lot seth. you did not left your url?
Very cool poem. Enjoyed the interplay and personification of Sun and Moon, as well as the mythological references. Deep poem and well done. Thanks, trisha 🙂
thanks a lot adam, you are a wonderful person 🙂
what a lovely poem! the dawn always fascinates me and yes, the moon looks so alone up there while waiting to meet the sun. =)
thanks bing. i cant open your blogspot blog 😦
thats a loss to me.
thanks a lot adams. when i think of sun i always think of apollo (or our indian suryadev)- both ride seven horse chariot.
beautiful…hope he comes riding in soon…smiles.
thanks brian. 🙂
This is delicate and sweet Trisha. I like it a lot. Lovely images of the shy moon holding back to maybe wish a hello to the sun. Nice
it really looks like that, as if she waits to see him before retiring to bed.
reminder:
#1: return favors
#2: visit 18 fresh poets…
I know you are doing,
thus please give me a word if you are done…
i always pay back visits as long as the sites open in my computer 🙂
i have already completed the 18 and left you a message.
peace n happiness 4u4ever.
p.s. have a beautiful weekend 🙂
full of laughter and happiness.
Beautiful! I absolutely loved it, Trisha… 🙂 I am really partial to anything that mentions starts, moon, dawn or night…. 🙂
me too- sun and ocean are also included
My favorite part of the day is the gloaming. Thanks
very intelligent 🙂
beautiful imagery 🙂 loved the scenary described…
well written 🙂
thanks a lot raj. you are a sweet friend.
Imagination meets creativity! Nice one
thanks a lot amit. you are very, very sweet.
another fantastic write, but this verse is pure poetry
A beautiful silver maiden
Waiting for the Apollo
Soon he will show up
Riding his seven horse chariot.
thanks a lot pete. you must be busy with your new project.
best of luck!
❤ yes
thanks nelly. 🙂
Lovely personification of the moon and sun. Bravo!
thanks a lot robert.
Loved the moon waiting for the sun bit.
Such a nicely written poem, capturing those finer things that otherwise just go unnoticed/unquestioned and hence unanswered…
Loved it! Keep them flowing..
Best Regards!