Dawn and moon

Dawn has broken
Black sky has turned blue
Deepest shade of pure blue
Stars are twinkling softly.

Waiting for the sun to come
So they could rest for a while
Moon is still not sure
If she will return home.

Or wait and meet sun
To wish him goodbye
So she lingers in the sky
As birds sing, stars sparkle.

A beautiful silver maiden
Waiting for the Apollo
Soon he will show up
Riding his seven horse chariot.

Advertisements

65 thoughts on “Dawn and moon

  1. “Moon is still not sure
    If she will return home.

    Or wait and meet sun
    To wish him goodbye”

    I really like this part because for the last several early mornings have watch the moon still visible in the predawn sky. It is a beautifully poetic way of expressing this delightful vision.

    Peace,
    Suzanne

  2. this is SO BEAUTIFUL…so poetic and romantic..
    well done,Trisha…
    you are truly a prolific writer…
    blessed be…
    take care of you..
    hugs
    shakira

  3. Simply beautiful Trish, and you painted a perfect picture all through your poem. I love the way you open your poem with the first 4 lines. It is a strong poem with a good foundation.

    Dawn has broken
    Black sky has turned blue
    Deepest shade of pure blue
    Stars are twinkling softly.

  4. Pingback: Thursday Poets Rally Week 22 (June 10-16, 2010) « Jingle

  5. Golden Lotus of God’s Love as always you keep putting them out there and they just keep getting better and better..very beautiful poem…enjoy as well(+) 🙂
    soulbro*xo

    • i too love the moon. i have not read moon bear. its good to have a dad who will read stories for you. my parents never told us a story they handed us dozens of books 🙂

      thanks alan.

  6. Very cool poem. Enjoyed the interplay and personification of Sun and Moon, as well as the mythological references. Deep poem and well done. Thanks, trisha 🙂

  7. Loved the moon waiting for the sun bit.
    Such a nicely written poem, capturing those finer things that otherwise just go unnoticed/unquestioned and hence unanswered…
    Loved it! Keep them flowing..

    Best Regards!

Please leave your blog URL/links with your comments if they are not included in your gravatar. If you don’t you will deprive me from one of my favourite things-returning your sweet gesture.

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out /  Change )

Google photo

You are commenting using your Google account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s